This was the feedback I got from someone that reviewed my resume. I would like i

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This was the feedback I got from someone that reviewed my resume. I would like if someone revise it for me.
Hi Lavar, thanks for sending me your resume. Here’s what jumped out at me right away:
For ATS / HRIS purposes, 100% of your content needs to be left-aligned. This is a small thing, but it makes a difference in terms of getting past screening software.
I would really like to see you strengthen your professional profile. If I’m hiring a graphic designer, I’m less interested in skills like “hardworking” and “multitasking” than I am in your ability to tell compelling visual stories, strengthen brand strategy, and bring creative vision to life. Tell me (succinctly) who you are, what you can do, and why you’re the strongest candidate for your target roles.
Those are the themes you should be weaving into the entire body of the resume. Tell me more about your impeccable design, collaboration, and project management skills. Make it clear that you understand your employers’ target audiences, and know how to engage them across various media. Show that you’re adept at integrating your work into overall marketing objectives.
For example, you could write bullets about how you:
Manage the full lifecycle of creative projects, from concept through delivery
Work with cross-functional teams to ensure consistency and cohesion
Incorporate elements that resonate with key demographics
Translate brand stories into compelling visuals
Make aesthetically informed judgments about multimedia collateral
Designers who position themselves as powerful thought partners to the marketing and brand teams are very, very successful. So be sure to highlight your collaborative approach as often as possible. Keep reinforcing the idea that you are using your design skills to amplify brand messaging for target audience segments.
I would also encourage you to incorporate more ATS keywords into your text. If you decide to do the resume updates yourself, you should look over 10-15 target positions, identify the terminology you see repeated frequently, and then weave that language into the body of the resume. This will help you get past resume-reading software filters and in front of human eyeballs.
If you decide to work with me, then of course I’ll take care of all this for you (layout, content overhaul, keyword optimization, value proposition). My fee for a project this size is:


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